| Schools
should have uniforms. Uniforms make schools safer, reduce the
"in" competitions, |
| and give a professional look
to students. |
| Uniforms
make it easy to identify students and non-students. In a uniformed
school, whenever |
| a teacher sees someone out
of uniform, they can immediately approach the person and direct |
| them to the appropriate location.
Intruders can be sent out of the school or charged with |
| trespassing, thus reducing
the opportunities for drugs or weapons to enter the school. |
| Uniforms
also benefit schools because they give students a positive and
professional image. |
| When members of the community
pass the school, they are greeted with images of cleanliness
and |
| professionalism. |
| Uniforms
also minimize economic comparisons. When students wear the same
thing, no one can |
| be centered out because he/she
can't afford Billabong. Furthermore, when students wear uniforms, |
| they can only be judged on
their intelligence and personality. |
| In
conclusion, professionalism, safety and acceptance are all improved
in a uniformed |
| school. Uniforms should be
mandatory in Ontario schools. |
| |
| Comments:
This Series of Paragraphs is well written. It flows well from
introduction to conclusion. |
| The
writer's point of view is backed up with three supporting arguments
(identify intruders/safety,. |
| economic
status comparison, professionalism) |
| |